In writing I have used a poem by James K. Baxter as a starting point to write my own holiday poem. I hope you like it.
Lachie’s James K Baxter Inspired Poetry
Hanmer was usual enough;
It had a lolly pot, a pool, some pedal bikes, a few waterslides and even a Fudge shop.
My family, Amber’s family and I did what swimmers do -
Sliding down the waterslides, pedaling hard on the pedal bikes, fast, quick swimming, relaxing in the egg smelling spas, drying off in the 27 degree sun and Having lots of fun in Amber’s family’s wooden police apartment.
Sliding down the waterslides, pedaling hard on the pedal bikes, fast, quick swimming, relaxing in the egg smelling spas, drying off in the 27 degree sun and Having lots of fun in Amber’s family’s wooden police apartment.
Doing nothing important.
Those pools are pretty smelly aren't they!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you loved Hanmer!!
ReplyDeleteI love hammer springs it is one of my Favourite places to go for a holiday and I Love your poem. KAITLIN
ReplyDeletemmm fudge
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